Their Forbidden Desire (Angela Fattig)



This is the first story that’s part of an erotic series. I won this book in a giveaway. Not my normal genre, but I thought I’d give it a try. First of all, it is riddled with errors. I was shocked to find that it wasn’t edited very well. If you overlook that, it’s just a story about a girl (Melody) who falls in love with a guy (Nate), but he is an Incubus who takes the form of the perfect looking man. The character of Melody is described as shy in the very beginning, but turns seductive in an instant, saying anything and giving herself to Nate without modesty, meaning that the characters are not believable at all. Skip this one if erotica isn’t your genre.


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